Presentations and Feedback
Practice Pitch: https://youtu.be/HBZcUiiJez4 Final Pitch: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LeMZwBYkz5M P3,P4,M2 & M3 Feedback from practice pitch Following my practice pitch I was given a lot of feedback from both my peers and Mrs Eyres. I was initially told that the colour scheme that I had chosen (grey, black yellow and white) was more geared towards the grime genre. I was told to look at competing magazines to get an idea for a more R&B based colour scheme. However I justified my over use of the colour yellow as it was in conjunction with the colour gold which I felt was too tacky to have in my colour palette. Along with this many noticed that I didn't have an online/ digital version of the magazine. Because I didn't include the digital version of my finished products they didn't see that there was a website link on the front cover. Another concern that was raised was the content of the adverts, the people givi...